The Exercise Bug

by Og
Categories: Comics, theory, Writing
Comments: 2 Comments
Published on: April 13, 2009

Once upon a time I had a film under development here at the Worldwide Headquarters of Steve Ogden, Inc. about a bug who was having difficulties with his exercise equipment. The film was called, literally enough, The Exercise Bug.

Flash forward several years. I am not actively developing animated films at the moment, and have turned my attention instead to a variety of comics projects. One of these is an anthology I’m involved in. I asked one of my very talented illustrator friends to join us, and he agreed to participate but only  if I’d write him something. So I spent Friday evening turning a 5 minute film idea into a 5 page comic idea. Fair enough. And although the main character is not a bug anymore, but a man, it’s funny how little it changed.

It’s funny, too, how hard I had to work to get that script down to only 5 pages, which had been our agreed-upon length. There were a couple of funny sequences I had to lose in order to get it there, but on balance, I think the piece is tighter, and funnier, for it. Those of you would-be writers out there – try forcing yourself to a page limit and see what happens. I think it’s good for a story if you can get down to that  limit and retain the heart of your story and character beats. I find most stories can compress down a lot farther than we tend to think.

More on that anthology very soon.

2 Comments - Leave a comment
  1. Beth says:

    Heh, I remember when you did the Exercise Bug :) Have fun with the comics.

  2. Og says:

    Yeah, it’s a trip down memory lane. You wouldn’t believe some of the old nuggets I’m pulling back out of mothballs. Remember our old friend Ferrell? Thank you for the note, Beth!

Leave a comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

*

You may use these HTML tags and attributes: <a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <strike> <strong>

Archives
Welcome , today is Wednesday, May 23, 2012