The bottom half of this page is new. The top is a combo edited from the original page.
For those who care about how the sausage is made, here’s sort of a rundown. First, the original page:
So, in the top part of the page, mostly I’m editing for length here. It took 8 panels in the old version, but only 4 in the new version. Also, though, I’m trying to expose a little more openly the blatant conflict of interest and basically bad journalism that’s going on at Terraluna News.
In the lower half, I wanted to bring out the ore barge and surrounding events and prevailing theories. I sort of glossed over it in the original, and that was a mistake I’m repairing now.